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如何把中心句扩展成段落?

发布人:环美出国    发布时间:2016-04-25


  Throughout history,people have dreamed of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. What, in your opinion, would be the most important element of a perfect society? What can people do to help create an ideal society?

  中心句: The most important element of a perfect society.

  一些思路:

  Safety = No crime, trust our neighbours,feel part of a community,able to leave doors unlocked.Trust institutions (police, government),feel protected by the law.Safety is the most basic freedom.

  然后进行扩展:

  If I had to choose the one,most desirable element of an ideal society,it would have to be safety. A safe society would be one in which crime did not exist,and in which all citizens trusted their neighbours, felt part of a community, and were even able to leave their doors unlocked without fear. A broader definition of safety could also include belief in the integrity of state institutions, such as governments or police forces, and confidence that we are all protected by fair laws. In this sense, safety could be described as the most basic freedom and the starting point for the creation of a perfect society.
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