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雅思图表折线作文是怎样的

发布人:环美出国    发布时间:2020-03-23

雅思写作范文剖析

题型

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Write at least 150 words.

范文

The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 {天然 20}

However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

参考翻译

这张照片显示了 1979年 2004年一个欧洲国家食用的牛、羊、鸡和鱼数量的变化。

在 1979,牛肉被消耗在四种食物中,大约每人每周 225 克。羊肉和鸡肉的消费量差不多,大约 150 克,但鱼少了很多,只有 50 多克。

然而,1979年 2004年的 25 年间,牛肉和羊肉的消费量分别大幅下降至 100 克和 55 克。 大约克。鱼的消费量也有所下降,但没有那么多,数量只有不到 50 克。因此,虽然它一直是最少吃的食物,但它的消费水平是最稳定的。

相反,鸡肉的消费量呈上升趋势,超过了羊肉 1980年和牛肉 1989年。到 2004,人均周消费量飙升至约 250 克。

总的来说,这张图显示了鸡肉的消费量是如何快速增长的,以及在一段时间内其他三种食物的消费量是如何下降的。

方法拨号

题目源于雅思7, TEST 2.,真实地学习了这篇作文的信息点选择和组织,从而写出了所有的动态图表作文。

• 模型文本的具体结构如下:

第一段: 介绍图表的内容 (重写标题)。

第二段: 描述起点信息: 描述 1979年的四个数据。重点是比较观察 {34.

第三、四段: 叙述起点后的发展变化,并进行有效分组: 1979年,牛、羊、鱼的消费量一直在下降,鸡却一直在上升。这两部分可以分两段写,也可以合成一段,这里单独写。 结题部分: 总结和说明总体特征 (总体、.)。

突出句型

句型 1 Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).

评论,首先,学习被动语态的使用,使你的句型多样化。第二,括号的使用使引用的数据简洁明了,但不过分。

句型 2 The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

评论,伙计们先看看它的中文翻译,想想他们会如何组织句子?然后突然回头看,我发现 “唯一的办法” 是 “also, but, so, although( 也,但是,所以,虽然) ”四个内聚词的使用将松散的信息组织在一起。同时,它完美地反映了高分作文的要求: 对数据进行比较和比较。

句型 3 The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989.

注释,“On the other hand” 用作插入并放置在主题 “the 上 consumption 后 "." Overtaking "是使用非谓语动词,使句子更加整合,而不是写 it overtook.“That” 指的是 consumption,,否则该词必须重复三次才能显得冗长。

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